You've finished your novel.
You've done everything in your power to get it ready for print, but you
wonder what's the next step?
Maybe an evaluation by an editor to give you a big-picture view
of what works and what doesn't? Or maybe have a copyeditor make sure it
reads well? Perhaps just a proofread to make sure it's as clean as it can
be? Or maybe it's time to dive right into the book proposal?
Whatever stage you may be at, John David Kudrick, MA in Journalism (Professional Writing: Fiction),
is ready to serve you as a fiction editor who wants to make your story the best
that it can be.
John David has had stories on the brain since he was a boy
and his father and grandparents filled his head with tales of biblical heroes
and heroines, rugged mountain men, courageous frontierswomen, daring
gunfighters, and brave soldiers and sailors. Since those boyhood days, John
David has turned his love of fiction into an opportunity to serve others who
are equally as passionate about telling a good story.
With more than a decade of editorial experience, a
bachelor's degree in theology, and a master's degree focused on
fiction, John David is ready to partner with you in crafting the very best
story you can write – whether it be helping you with a manuscript diagnostic,
developmental editing, substantive editing, copyediting, proofreading, or book
proposal development.
While he enjoys working on most every genre of fiction you
may write, John David considers his main specialties to be action / military, historical
fiction, science fiction (sci-fi), contemporary / mainstream, and Christian
fiction (all genres – for both adults and young adults).
Thus far in his career, John David has had the opportunity
to serve as senior editor at Whitaker House, a faith-based publisher located
outside Pittsburgh.
While there, he was privileged to lead the roll-out of the company's
first fiction line, which included James Byron Huggins' Nightbringer, a book that John David personally
edited and that Library Journal named
one of the top five Christian novels for 2004.
As a freelance editor, John David has been privileged to
work with some of the best publishers of fiction in the nation, including David
C. Cook, NavPress, Realms Fiction, and Marcher Lord Press.
When he's not helping authors fine-tune their stories,
John David spends as much time as possible with his wife, Sheila, and their
three kids in western Pennsylvania
where they make their home. He also enjoys attending and volunteering as a
writer / editor for their home church.
"I confess… did a lot of investigation over the Internet… from half way around the world… received a many sample edits / quotes from different editors (~12!). My choice was perfect. On a scale of 1-to10 I rate John a solid (plus) 10! First and foremost for the English… past tense-present tense… grammer —use of the em dash… POV… the whole nine yards. Perfect.And next – for him getting into the story… making very good COMMENTS and suggestions all throughout. This includes checking things on the Internet… noting that the coca cola slogan – “The Real Thing” did not come out in the time period that I mentioned it… and many other excellent comments." Michael Weiss
Additional Information
Services:
Manuscript Diagnostic – Get a big-picture look at your novel's
strengths and weaknesses, with a general evaluation sheet and a list of
recommended action steps to take your story from good to great.
Developmental Editing
– With a detailed evaluation document and page-by-page comments / suggestions
throughout your novel, find out exactly how you can make your good story
even better.
Substantive Editing
– Receive guidance and hands-on editorial help from John David in
reorganizing and revising your story to take care of style, structure,
content, plotting, character, story flow, and point-of-view issues. Also
includes copyediting and proofreading.
Copyediting
– Got the big-picture stuff down already? Then let John David take
care of grammar, word usage, tone, format, and more with a copyedit that
will add a shine to your story. Also includes proofreading.
Proofreading
– Don't let your story get tossed aside because of a
misspelled word or misplaced punctuation. Get your novel as clean as can
be by allowing John David to read through it and fix typos,
inconsistencies, misspellings, and punctuation problems.
Book Proposal Development –
Novel ready for submission? Then you're ready to develop your book
proposal. Together, you and John David will create a compelling,
well-crafted document that's a necessity in getting published.
Genre Specialties:
Christian
fiction (all genres – for both adults and young adults)
Action
/ Military
Historical
Fiction
Science
Fiction (Sci-Fi)
Contemporary
/ Mainstream
EDITORIAL WORK ON
PUBLISHED NOVELS
Nightbringer by
James Byron Huggins (Whitaker House)
One of the Top Five Christian Novels in 2004 (Library Journal)
Editorial Role: Developmental Editor / Copyeditor
Knuckle Sandwich by Adam Palmer (NavPress)
Editorial Role: Copyeditor / Proofreader
Godiva by David Rose (Whitaker House)
Editorial Role: Developmental Editor
Black Box by Larry Jones (Whitaker House)
Editorial Role: Developmental Editor
Additional Editorial
Work on Published Novels (Editing / Proofreading)
Additional Editorial Work on Published Novels (Editing / Proofreading)
A Beautiful Fall by Chris Coppernoll (David C. Cook)
A Bigger Life by Annette Smith (NavPress)
A Portrait for Marguerite by Kate Lloyd (David C. Cook)
As Young as We Feel by Melody Carlson (David C. Cook)
Crime Scene Jerusalem by Alton Gansky (David C. Cook)
From Bad to Worse by Todd & Jedd Hafer (NavPress)
Going for Broke by Melanie Dobson (David C. Cook)
Heading Home by Renee Riva (David C. Cook)
Informed Consent by Sandra Glahn (David C. Cook)
Mooch by Adam Palmer (NavPress)
O Little Town by Don Reid (David C. Cook)
Night Rain by Joe Hilley (David C. Cook)
Safe at Home by Richard Doster (David C. Cook)
Scared by Tom Davis (David C. Cook)
Shepherd’s Son by Terry W. Burns (David C. Cook)
Stolen Lives by Brian Reaves (David C. Cook)
Stretch Marks by Kimberly Stewart (David C. Cook)
Taking Tuscany by Renee Riva (David C. Cook)
Talking to the Dead by Bonnie Grove (David C. Cook)
The Blue Umbrella by Mike Mason (David C. Cook)
The Deposition by Joe Hilley (David C. Cook)
The Devil’s Apprentice by John Wallen (Virtualbookworm)
The Gathering Place by Becca Anderson (David C. Cook)
The Latest Mrs. Furst by Susan Martins Miller (David C. Cook)
The Micah Judgment by Jim Kraus (David C. Cook)
The Peacemakers by Jack Cavanaugh (David C. Cook)
The Real Enemy by Kathy Herman (David C. Cook)
The Reluctant Journey of David Connors by Don Locke (NavPress)
The Renewal by Terri Kraus (David C. Cook)
The Renovation by Terri Kraus (David C. Cook)
The Restorer by Sharon Hinck (NavPress)
The Restorer’s Journey by Sharon Hinck (NavPress)
The Restorer’s Son by Sharon Hinck (NavPress)
The Summer the Wind Whispered My Name by Don Locke (NavPress)
The Unfortunate Karma of Breone Baine by Deidre Havrelock (David C. Cook)
Three Weddings and a Bar Mitzvah by Melody Carlson (David C. Cook)
To Dance in the Desert by Kathleen Popa (David C. Cook)
Winterflight by Joseph Bayly (David C. Cook)
Feedback
"You have a true talent, John David, something God-given. All the
learning in the world can't give it to you, and nothing can take it away.
You comprehend on several levels far beneath the story itself, a rare thing in
literature these days. You can have my back anytime." – James Byron Huggins, Author of A
Wolf Story, The Reckoning, Leviathan, Cain, Hunter, Rora, Nightbringer, The
Scam, Sorcerer
"I highly recommend John David Kudrick. As an editor for Whitaker
House, his strong leadership and management skills became very evident and he
was soon promoted to senior editor. John was instrumental in Whitaker
House's expansion into Christian fiction." – Robert Whitaker, Jr., Vice President, Whitaker House Publishers
"John David Kudrick's copyediting and proofreading skills
have been a great benefit for NavPress. John's attention to detail and
knowledge of language give him the foundation that every good copyeditor needs.
He has the skills to spot errors and refine writing, resulting in a clean,
polished manuscript. And his responsible and professional manner means you can
depend on him to follow through on deadlines." – Darla Hightower, Production
Director, NavPress
"I have
worked as a copy editor/project coordinator at David C. Cook publishing for
four years now. One of my responsibilities is to send our trade-book
manuscripts out to freelance proofreaders. It has been my pleasure to work with
John David Kudrick, one of our A-list freelancers, during this period. John
David is a magnificent proofreader, as he has done stellar work for our
publishing company. He not only catches all of the little details by adhering
to The Chicago Manual of Style rules,
but he also queries questionable content when he thinks something is off (for
instance, a timeline discrepancy in a fiction book). In addition, John David
has never missed a deadline. In fact, a good amount of his projects have even
come in a few days early. These extra miles separate him from our average
proofreaders, who simply follow the rules and do not care about the content or
the quality of the book nearly as much. I have thoroughly enjoyed working with
John David. He's a joy to visit with and a wonderful professional to work
with. I could not give a freelancer a higher recommendation." – Jack Campbell, Copyeditor / Project
Coordinator, David C. Cook
"As a
copy editor and project coordinator at David C. Cook, I have a long list of
freelance proofreaders to choose from for each project. John David Kudrick is
at the top of that list as a thorough, dependable proofreader. He consistently
turns in excellent work, catching the tiny details as well as finding
discrepancies in the overarching stories and themes of the books. He is willing
to complete rushed projects, and I know I can count on him for high-pressure
jobs. I thoroughly recommend him for any project." – Jaci Schneider, Copyeditor / Project Coordinator, David C. Cook
"Your network was a lifesaver after numerous previous disappointments and delays with indifferent/inexperienced editors. The consultant you provided did excellent work within the agreed upon timeframe and allocated fee. I am extremely satisfied and would recommend John David to anyone in need of a pressing and challenging editing service." Tino Randall, VP/Business Development, DevTec Global
"John communicated quickly and with great helpfulness going far beyond what I honestly expected for what I paid. He was gracious and honest at the same time and provided me both with very useful comments as well as some very helpful material. I feel he was a very effective 'coach' for me at this stage of my writing. Thanks very much." —Martin Bennett, Hungry Kitty LLC
"John did a highly proficient job of editing, and followed my instructions to the letter. His comments made it clear that he had thoroughly read and carefully thought about the text." —John Wallen
"The network was very useful in helping me source a Christian editor. I was impressed with John David’s previous editing credentials and the testimonials from his past clients. The feedback he gave me was very positive but also constructive. He was very thorough in terms of showing me the weaknesses in my writing and where I need to do more work." Lianne Blanch
"I'm very happy that I found Book Editing Associates." —Lydia Klismith
REQUEST FOR ESTIMATE/CONSULTATION
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