You need a book editor. It’s impossible to proof your own work; you tend to overlook mistakes of all types. Your mind subconsciously fills in what it thinks should be there, and your conscious appraisal is none the wiser.
A book manuscript should be noticed for its content and quality. The writer is too close to the material to be objective. A professional book editor can recognize the repetitions, inconsistencies, faulty logic, and other problems that are often overlooked by the writer.
No editor can guarantee publication, but if you want your work to have the best chance of being read and considered seriously—and if you are open to other opinions about your work—we’ll be glad to help you work toward that goal.
The book editors and proofreaders posted on this site specialize in numerous fiction genres and nonfiction topics. Have your book manuscript, short story, or article professionally edited before submitting to a literary agent, publisher, or book printer.